Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Sinking Moons by Aidyn Smith

Her uncle worked endless nights in the fields
slaving, toiling, till every grain was placed
upon his back, a large woven basket
when he came home, hands aching from the night
she called out his name, curled up, shivering
he stumbled, legs weak from the long miles
finding his way through the dark, to her room
there she lay underneath one tattered
blanket—the one her mother wove for her
just before she passed. She glanced up at him
eyes wide, thankful that he returned again.
Sometimes she worried he would not come back
Just like her mother had, not long ago
He smiles, remembering the way she would laugh
“Papa,” she says, holding up her small hands.
He kneels down, the withered mattress sinking
Placing his callused hands on her shoulders
he smiles too. She sighs, thankful of
his warmth, his love, and the safety she feels
in his arms. They sit like this for awhile
Before long, he hears the soft coons of her
restful sleep; she is safe again, for tonight
He picks himself up, grunting so softly
So as not to wake his sweet precious girl
She is everything, and he knows she worries
He shuffles into the bedroom, dirt floors
give way to heavy tread. He thinks of her,
how she found a way to make something from
the nothing that they always had; “magic,”
their daughter used to coon, as she eyed the
suppers her mother would make every night.
But no matter, they had each other now
And they would find their way back again soon.


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1 comment:

  1. Aidyn,

    Wow! I loved how much of a story you put together from this image. I looked at the picture once before I read it and again after and it had a whole new meaning.

    My favorite line was, "He kneels down, the withered mattress sinking
    Placing his callused hands on her shoulders
    he smiles too. " I thought this line really captured the struggle of the man who was caring for her but also tied in how content they were in some moments together. Kinda like the struggle is all worth the little moments of happiness. Great job!

    -madelyn

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