I
remember the spontaneity
that
fueled the beginning of every day.
No
two were ever the same here with us.
Thinking
on our toes was never too hard,
during
our adventures in the sun rays.
It
was the enthusiasm, always,
that
convinced me to take part.
How
involved in every game you would be;
imagination
fueling the young soul.
I
remember the hot and stickiness,
of
every day during the month of June.
Our
hair matted to our glowing faces,
energy
levels as high as a sloth’s.
Trying
to stay cool with our popsicles,
slouched
in the lukewarm, backyard kiddie pool.
I
remember the days of barefoot walks;
purposely
zig-zagging in direction,
so
our toes could squish in the ice cold mud
then
regain feeling on the scorching road.
Back
when curfew depended on darkness;
the
ability to see your fingers,
when
stretched out as night completed our day.
I
remember the few exceptions too,
when
we were allowed to stay out at night.
Crouching
in the tall grass waiting for them,
the
tiny balls of light that danced and twirled;
creating
a mesmerizing light show.
Fireflies
synchronized in their night flight.
A
performance for the summer nights
that
we anticipated each year.
BY JACOB SAENZ
I remember nights of
playing
Lotería w/Mom & Big Manny
as a way to learn the
Spanish they spoke
to each other but not to
their kids
who caught on to certain
words
like cállate, cerveza, chicharrón;
little nuggets I ate up
like the pinto beans we
used
instead of the blue
chips
Mom kept in her Bingo
bag
she carried every Friday
night
when her & Tia
Shirley
went to the Moose Lodge,
her hair & coat
reeking
w/the smoke of all who
lost.
I remember El Borracho,
the man always holding a
bottle
& about to fall over
yet never does
like Big Manny stumbling
home
late at night after a
payday,
breath & belly full
of beer,
who one time took a piss
in our bedroom.
I remember La Garza,
not for the heron it is
but cousin Tony &
his kids,
nights of sleepovers
& pizza,
PlayStation on a 40-inch
TV,
the night he & Lil
Jesse sneaked
bumps of coke in the
bathroom
& I rubbed numb my
teenage teeth.
I remember El Musico,
not the chubby man
clutching his guitarra
but my brother Dave
loading crates
of records & a dual
turntable case
like a coffin into the
back of a van,
the same set I hit my
back on at ten
when I fell out of the
top bunk bed.
But I prefer to remember La Sirena
back when her breasts
were free
of the seashells she now
holds
to cover them in water
so blue
cold, her scales so red,
her name clung to the
tongue
like dulce de leche.
I really like the imagery of the fireflies in the grass, especially the line "the tiny balls of light that danced and twirled" I think the language that you used there really gives the poem life! Great job!
ReplyDelete-Kimberly Coverly