Friday, April 19, 2013

Mismatched Room by Kathleen Fellows

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Porträt der Frau Charpentier und ihre Kinder by Pierre-Auguste Renoir (1878)


Mismatched Room by Kathleen Fellows

The dog scowls at the lazy humans.
That improper boy resembling a girl
with hair grown past his shoulders and onto
dangerous territory past his neck
where a proper boy would never let it.

The dog is agitated for his back
where the human boy is perched, privileged.

The dog matches Madame Carpenter’s dress,
colorfully black, white, and too puffed.
She casually and uncomfortably sits
as if she were waiting on an interview.
She displays her ambiguous children
with a neutral expression and a hand,
closed and adorned wit heavy gold
from an unknown man, or maybe herself.

The dog hates the carpet on which he lays.
Even without a good sight for color,
he notices the clash of the styles
he sees the western and eastern Asian,
he senses the modern and classical.
Nothing had been placed with good intensions.

The dog wishes the room would unclutter.
A table has been shoved into the room
and piled with vases and golden food
that screams the woman’s class attention needs
and forces it into a visitor.

If only he could disassociate
himself with that lifeless, rag of a dress
worn by that woman who mixes styles
and parades her boys around in blue frills.

1 comment:

  1. For some reason the line "She displays her ambiguous children" caught my attention. I think I appreciate the juxtaposition of displays and ambiguity.
    Also, I really liked that you decided to write from the perspective of the dog. It was unexpected, making it far more fun to read.
    Megan W

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