Legs by
Megan Windom
My art
teacher said: Look, think, make a mark
Look, I told
myself, and pushed to make the
crucial
connection that would engage me.
Everyone
knows that a cow has four legs,
two circles
with four stems dripping from the
bottom and
splotchy patterns on the side
can bring
them to mind. Look, my teacher would
surely tell
me, they are nothing like that.
Likeness is
the thing. First, look at what’s near,
the delicate
foot with toes pointing at
the pen that’s
hooked into my eye. Gesture
needs to be ensnared
before the details.
Looking
destroys the way I see the world.
Nothing is
whole, but the relation of
parts that
come into close proximity
with light
accenting some, hiding others.
But they’re
broken. Incomplete. They require
some subtle
substance. There’s more intent than
the surface
is willing to expose. Or
there should
be. Concepts act as driving force
behind the
angle of her wrist where her
hand dips
down to drape across her red knee.
The figure
to be drawn – roughly my age.
She’s
perched upon a platform, no single
angle of
modesty afforded her.
The corner of
the room becomes her friend.
She watches
it raptly while we watch her.
Look. Okay. But the eye is no longer
seeing. It
thinks in pools of light and dark.
Pause, draw
an inch. Erase to start over.
Everyone
knows a woman has two legs.
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Pencil by
Marianne Boruch
My drawing teacher
said: Look, think, make a mark.
Look, I told myself.
And waited to be
marked.
Clouds are white but
they darken
with rain. Even a
child blurs them back
to little woolies on
a hillside, little
bundles without legs.
Look, my teacher
would surely tell me,
they’re nothing
like that. Like
that: the lie. Like that: the poem.
She said: Respond to
the heaviest part
of the figure first.
Density is
form. That I keep
hearing destiny
is not a mark of character.
Like pilgrimage
once morphed to mirage
in a noisy room, someone
so earnest at my ear.
Then marriage slid.
Mir-aage, Mir-aage, I heard the famous
poet let loose
awry into her
microphone, triumphant.
The figure to be
drawn —
not even half my age.
She’s completely
emptied her face for
this job of standing still an hour.
Look. Okay. But the little
dream in there,
inside the think
that comes next. A
pencil in my hand, its secret life
is charcoal, the wood
already burnt,
a sacrifice.
Looking destroys the way I see the world.
ReplyDeleteNothing is whole, but the relation of
parts that come into close proximity
with light accenting some, hiding others.
I absolutely love this part. It's so weird to think of how different the same thing can be when it is in different environments and how when one person looks at an image, they may focus on something that someone else didn't even notice.
-Melissa Campana